Friday, June 11, 2021


 this is the writing i had to do its about this girl stuck on ice i write she was

                                             stuck on ice and if she moved  the ice would break and boats would come by                                              and not see her she was stuck on the ice for a couple of years and she got out in                                           2042 and it was scary so a helicopter came and save her and she was happy and                                          went  back home and lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. I'm glad there was a happy ending Te Ararangi.
    It couldn't of been easy for her being in the ice for that long.
    Do you know how she managed to get herself stuck?.

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