I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Whaea Heather. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 25, 2021
my tuhi tuhi 2799
here is my writing. 2799
The year is 2799. Toxic fumes smother the planet. The survivors of The Great Toxic War congregate in the fields of Elysium, considering the future of mankind.
The year 2799 was coming To survive we have to avoid the toxic fumes smothering the planet and the people stay safe. Now people have seen toxic fumes. It could be poisonous and could kill them. That's why the bubbles around our heads it smells bad too. The bubbles around our heads help us not smell it. It helps me sometimes. Sometimes I feel like an astronaut because there is a bubble around my head. But I could barely breathe sometimes. Some people died from the toxic fumes. Years later more toxic fumes came on earth and killed more people. Then 2 people had to try to stop the toxic fumes from coming. There are all kinds of different toxic fumes like sleep and poison. The two people that were trying to stop the toxic fumes names were James and lina.
James and Lina were doing this to save the world so people don’t Die. the toxic fumes got even worse. James and Lina had an idea to get rid of the toxic fumes so it doesn't get worse. Then it got worse and heaps of people got sick but did not die.
So James and Lina stopped most of the toxic fumes but not all of them.
It started spreading all around the world and just got worse but then James and Lina stopped all of them and everybody lived happily ever after.
The end
Friday, June 18, 2021
Thursday, June 17, 2021
Tuesday, June 15, 2021
Friday, June 11, 2021
Tuesday, June 1, 2021
RAIN
WALT about the damage that the rain has done over the past few days in Canterbury.
We have big puddles and a lot of blocked gutters and drains in Christchurch over the past couple of days.
We have had to try and stay away from the surface flooding. This has been caused by some of the drains being blocked with the leaves and the water cant drain away.
The flood has been caused sewage and other pollution to overflow and now a lot of the water is contaminated. If you come in contact with this polluted water you must shower yourself and wash your clothes.
Some schools have been damaged and dad to work in the hall. Some of the power cells have been flooding and damaged. There have been evacuation from some houses.
The rivers have broken their banks and there has also been strong gusts of wind.
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