here is my writing. 2799
The year is 2799. Toxic fumes smother the planet. The survivors of The Great Toxic War congregate in the fields of Elysium, considering the future of mankind.
The year 2799 was coming To survive we have to avoid the toxic fumes smothering the planet and the people stay safe. Now people have seen toxic fumes. It could be poisonous and could kill them. That's why the bubbles around our heads it smells bad too. The bubbles around our heads help us not smell it. It helps me sometimes. Sometimes I feel like an astronaut because there is a bubble around my head. But I could barely breathe sometimes. Some people died from the toxic fumes. Years later more toxic fumes came on earth and killed more people. Then 2 people had to try to stop the toxic fumes from coming. There are all kinds of different toxic fumes like sleep and poison. The two people that were trying to stop the toxic fumes names were James and lina.
James and Lina were doing this to save the world so people don’t Die. the toxic fumes got even worse. James and Lina had an idea to get rid of the toxic fumes so it doesn't get worse. Then it got worse and heaps of people got sick but did not die.
So James and Lina stopped most of the toxic fumes but not all of them.
It started spreading all around the world and just got worse but then James and Lina stopped all of them and everybody lived happily ever after.
The end
Kia ora Te Ararangi.
ReplyDeleteWhat a huge weight that was for James and Lina to carry.For only two people to save the world,they must of been remarkable people.
What do you think it was that caused the fumes in the first place?.